Black Poetry : Solo

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Nov 10, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been doing it

    So-lo ~

    For so long,

    I'm strong :fight:

    Figuring for me

    Since the day

    I was born

    Right...

    From the start

    Jump-start my heart

    Beat all the odds

    How I've grown

    All alone...

    So-lo...

    I'm on my own

    A solitary mission

    My mind condones

    No trinity...

    Hey, :geek:

    That ain't for me

    A self made man

    Writes his own history

    No father, son

    Or Holy Ghost... you see

    Can live for me

    Cause I... (cough)

    Excuse me,

    My dying day

    SOMEBODY-

    HELP me

    PLEASE...

    I'm so afraid :crying:

    LORD, (I-can't-breathe!!!)



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
    very nice..
    keep on flowin coz ima reading..
    much love:angel1: was here
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my goodness
    feeling you on this scribe
    chilling
    much love
    Peace
     
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    Just know that you're really not.

    This piece was hot.

    Peace.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got Ya..... :spank: Or :court:


    i enjoyed reading this soldier.... Salut!

    let him breath again lord ,we dont want you to leave this great Poet!:smile:

    Love liberty
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep it coming lovin da scribe here
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess solo aint always the way to go huh :)
     
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    1poet, this is really on point for me. I have done pretty much my whole life solo, to the point where I have someone now that may cause me to not be a solo eventually, and it's scary. It takes courage to lay out your fears, my friend. I applaud you.
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    You too are worthy of love!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still...

    feelin' your gift souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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