Black Poetry : Solitude

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  1. Desa'rae

    Desa'rae Member MEMBER

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    Alone

    sitting

    thinking

    images

    of

    you

    surround

    my

    head

    and

    I

    cry

    knowing

    its

    over

    desi2000-copywritten
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this here!

    Nice flo!:)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short & Sweet

    Desa'rae I can dig it ma! Deep joynt.

    Reas
     
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    Solitude
    So True ,no one knows

    Very nice

    MisTy
     
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    I'm feeling this.
    Good flow.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    :cry:
    oh this is so lovely and sad!
    :cry: -7 :spinstar:
     
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    :( Sadly written but beautifully expressed. I also thought that the pattern of words expressed the emotion of the poem even more so.
     
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