Black Poetry : Solitude

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  1. a-mere-man

    a-mere-man Member MEMBER

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    i sit back in deep thought in solitude i dwell.
    sometimes it feels good to be lonely as hell.
    Away from the drama and all of the noise on a faraway island i can hear a still voice.
    this is my choice my own decision i gaze at the stars and start reminescen.
    i see clearly the vision.
    my mind is at ease. i dont need to cool my nerves let me gaze at the sea .
    let me be man ...leave me alone.
    u make to much noise i am trying to keep poised.
    Get away from me i said this is my world.
    i dont need it to be tainted i like it void without noise.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoying the message and the flow.

    Solitude sometimes equals Peace which is of utmost importance to me.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes your flow gives off a nice calm...very relaxing...
    Peace
    Blue
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is real....

    Sometimes solitude is the key to inner peace as well as the answer to all of our problems...

    Keep spittin.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    INDEED DIS SET OFF A RING OF BANG
    VERY NICE DROP
     
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    A lot of people get the act of being alone confused with the emotion of being lonely.

    I feel U, everyone needs some them time, even if it's the majority of the time.
     
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    This was a very peaceful calming scribe, and the message is so true.
     
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    this drop is tight, and I'm def feelin you. I need some alone time everyday myself. Nothing is more calming and healing
     
  9. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear u...

    very nice flowing scribe...

    may god/allah/amun ra grant u a serene peaceful journey...
     
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