Black Poetry : Solitary

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The darkness my best cloak
    hiding the tears that I refuse
    to let fall.
    I tell you I'm okay
    but really inside my heart
    has exploded into a million
    molecules that fall
    Slowly, softly, gently
    Caught on my heart strings
    Falling back into place
    But askew on end and back to back.
    In the dark you never see the Pain
    and anquish.
    I relish my solitary existence
    In the dark.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside your quiet storm of reasons the dark is a safe place to loom in
    to release the emotions i feel ya here sis.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhhhh, this is an amazing piece! Mad love for this, sister. Wow.
     
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    I'm with gempis, in your solitude!

    Keep bringing us more of ThatGirl.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all
    I was working through somethings
    But I am so glad to be back with my family
    expressing my heart...
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW THATGIRL IS GREAT
    nice drop!
     
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