Black Poetry : SOLITARY CONTENTMENT OF

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A rage rag rug
    weave in colorful
    twist and twinez
    from scraps of clothes
    sitting alone in da chair
    embracing da wintery air
    hours spent beside kerosene
    light to bright up da night
    days grew shorter as nights longer
    crocheting a doily with age handz
    needles clicking against golden ban
    only a memory and picture remain
    upon the floor where tears stain
    a fuzzy little kitty shared da domain
    missing love and taps at the door
    from da day encore ,warm milk
    a tiny chuckle aloud at the eager meow
    as day come to close into bed
    wit a wilt pink rose a old bible in one hand
    soulful blow & hearty Amen

    (to be continue) :hearts2:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this took me on a poetic ride i thought of my grandmother
    and tales she use to tell me growing up.....you posed this well
    i was captured please finish this
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u sistah as i go back into the yesteryears pt 2 coming soon
     
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    $$RICH$$

    This is deep like tales of old.
    It does have one creating
    pictures in the mind.

    :hearthis: Keep blazing into part two.
     
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    tru dat thankz brutha HODEE stay tune for the upcoming pt.2
    as the picture is painted clearly
     
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    Very cozy picture of a grandmother, spinning yarns so to speak....Continue brotha.
     
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    thankz watz for the sweet fuzzy words as pt.II on da rise .
     
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