Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 24, 2003.
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O'my what a picture u painted here
where it all returns back to it's solo
beginning this took me somewhere
and i felt the rawness of the pen
a scribe of emotions flowin like
it was the last drop , drip from above
the mixing of wordz join hand
as it form a masterpiece .........wow !
tyte i be lovin dis .
I am feelin you on this, angelicsage, and I love the way you constructed it. Beautiful.
I am NEVER amazed when angelic comes to the page ...so painfully depicted
Beautiful description of the isolation of our souls-
Rich, I know you truly feel the raw emotion and edge
of reality setting into a soul...that is alone...alone we come
alone we go...all the lines in between...but a vapor of emotion
flowing............Thank you for the empathic words of support!
Much luv, Angelic
Gempis, Glad your feelin it, appreciate the support! Peace
Triniti........Girl, you always make my day! My lil' destee butterfly
of sunshine, lighting up my page! Much luv to you!
1poet, Thank you for hearing the voice of the soul
as well as communicating! Peace, Angelic
...and such is life....
a relative and introspective peace l find in this one...
So so vivid and emotional. You constructed a vision all should take heed of. Gurl, I truly felt your flow wit all my heart. The way you put it down is so original and tyte, loving all of it.
J'hiah...and such... is life, the peace you've found
is reflective of the peace you bring
Foxy, I couldn't be more blessed than to have a sister with a
heart as beautiful and "true" as yours.
Your presence is refreshing...
Sister to Sister...Much luv returned!
Whisper into the abyss filling it with right now.
Turn the page only to reveal death as a vehicle that everyone talks about, but nobody rushes to ride upon.
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