Black Poetry : Solitaire

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 24, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'my what a picture u painted here
    where it all returns back to it's solo
    beginning this took me somewhere
    and i felt the rawness of the pen
    a scribe of emotions flowin like
    it was the last drop , drip from above
    the mixing of wordz join hand
    as it form a masterpiece .........wow !
    tyte i be lovin dis .
     
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    I am feelin you on this, angelicsage, and I love the way you constructed it. Beautiful.
     
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    I am NEVER amazed when angelic comes to the page ...so painfully depicted :)
     
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    Beautiful description of the isolation of our souls-
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Rich, I know you truly feel the raw emotion and edge
    of reality setting into a soul...that is alone...alone we come
    alone we go...all the lines in between...but a vapor of emotion
    flowing............Thank you for the empathic words of support!
    Much luv, Angelic


    Gempis, Glad your feelin it, appreciate the support! Peace


    Triniti........Girl, you always make my day! My lil' destee butterfly
    of sunshine, lighting up my page! Much luv to you!


    1poet, Thank you for hearing the voice of the soul
    as well as communicating! Peace, Angelic
     
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    ...and such is life....

    a relative and introspective peace l find in this one...

    nfinite...
     
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    So so vivid and emotional. You constructed a vision all should take heed of. Gurl, I truly felt your flow wit all my heart. The way you put it down is so original and tyte, loving all of it.

    Much Love,
    Your sis
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah...and such... is life, the peace you've found
    is reflective of the peace you bring


    Foxy, I couldn't be more blessed than to have a sister with a
    heart as beautiful and "true" as yours.
    Your presence is refreshing...
    Sister to Sister...Much luv returned!
     
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    Sage-

    Whisper into the abyss filling it with right now.

    Turn the page only to reveal death as a vehicle that everyone talks about, but nobody rushes to ride upon.

    Lonely....alone.

    Free.
     
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