Quiet Poetry Lounge : Solitaire Commitment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mysslez, Feb 21, 2001.

  1. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    Four years with you.
    Two hundred eight weeks spent alone.
    When I was open and honest, you fed me closed off lies.While I made love to your heart
    and soul,
    you ****** me doggystyle.From the back was how you liked it.
    Just so you couldn't look me in the eyes
    while kissing her.
    I thought only I did what was special,
    what I thought no one else could do.
    Doggystyle ******* right behind me.
    But that wasn't as important as what was right in front of my face.I fed myself as many lies
    as you did.Maybe even more.
    I let myself believe that you were
    honest, faithful, and true to me.
    In actuality, you were honest, faithful and true to your game.
    I told myself that you loved me
    more than anyone else.You didn't love me at all.
    At least not until I caught you.
    I let myself catch you and all you could say was
    "I Love You", and "I'm Sorry".
    I'm not sure about the love,
    but you sure are one sorry ************.
    After all was said and done, I took you back.
    You never asked, but I'll tell you why.
    For everytime you ****** me over,
    for each time I caught you in a lie.
    Every phone number and condom wrapper
    left in my bed.
    For every single moment you lied and said you loved me,I ****** your best friend.
    No, not him. I ****** your ego.
    Everytime the phone rang and I answered it in another room, your ego kissed my ***.
    When I went out and stayed all night without a mention of my plans, your ego cried like a
    little boy.
    I never thought I'd see a grown man cry until the day you asked me to marry you and I
    asked, "Why? So you can **** me over beneath the sight of God.
    One thousand four hundred sixty one days with you. I'd be stupid to commit to life.

    -Myss Lez R.A.W.
     
  2. leggs623

    leggs623 Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Ain't nothing worse than a mind ****.

    There is no justification
    For infidelity

    Nice piece MyssLez
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    strong!

    my sistah...

    and why commit to 'life', when there was no good behavior during the time served?

    this is str8!

    Alyce
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Very Strong & Deeeeep !!!

    While I made love to your heart and soul,
    you ****** me doggystyle


    speechless !!! bravo !!!

    go 'head gurl !!!
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tuff!

    This is tuff!--but it shows how people forget that they are dealing with human beings and treat them less than that--well executed and raw--but with a revenge it should be cold and to the heart--Ra
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I likes this...school is now dismissed....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' my ....wow!
     
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