Black Poetry : Soliloquy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 12, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I miss you - Love you, I ~~
    Do you know how much
    'caring'
    feels like holding you
    in cinamon sprinkled
    arms 2 nite?

    Speaking solutions
    that summarized
    my whole
    world in anticipation
    of your cuming

    Put you on the
    pedestal
    suspended in mid air
    as I stared -- and
    asked questions of
    WHAT
    WHEN
    HOW
    WHERE; and
    WHY ~ knot ~
    love N2~ scraps
    of worn yarn--?

    I miss you - Love you, I ~~
    Do you know how much?

    Guessin' you have not
    a clue...
    when my soul speaks
    what my thoughts
    have revealed

    ...and there's no one
    listening to hear...
    how I feel


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me be the first ................

    to tell you this is ohhhh soooo sweet !!!!


    N2 - I must say,
    when i come to this site...
    i wanna read sooooo much of everybody's stuff -
    and then it just gets overwhelming.
    As if, once i start - I'll be hooked ,
    or I'll be soooo GLAZED OVER w/
    everyone's poetry
    that I won't be paying as much attention as I should
    to what I read ( poetry high maybe ? - LOL , 12 steps ? )

    but reading you ( and of course my close others )


    You just make it worth it , ya nahmeen ????

    Of all the guys that I know who write poetry,
    we all seem to agree that most girls we know
    don't care about our poetry -
    and it' s not something they share.

    How is that you, and soo many ladies on this site
    are soo poetic and in my town girls
    hate thoughtful expression ???

    I honestly spent years thinking
    women like you and afri , and Ga and etc.
    didn't even exist.

    am i just in the wrong city ??lol
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp~

    You are soooo sweet lil' brotha!
    I'm glad that you get the opportunity to read
    some of our (sista-gurls) scribes~ Thank you.

    To try an answer your question, brotha -- I
    don't think you are in the wrong city, I just
    think you haven't met those females in your
    town that write poetry... I'm sure their have
    got to be some there in your hometown?!?

    If not, you are just going to have to move into
    a 'cyber-city' -- right?!

    Thank you brotha o' mine for reading ME -- I
    appreciate YOU! :kiss:




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  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce...as you take it there, as only you know how, dear poetess.

    ~~mindwavesoflovepoetry~~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Friend (List~)

    Gurl, you are too kind...Thank you for reading ME!

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