Quiet Poetry Lounge : Soliloquy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 12, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I miss you - Love you, I ~~
    Do you know how much
    'caring'
    feels like holding you
    in cinamon sprinkled
    arms 2 nite?

    Speaking solutions
    that summarized
    my whole
    world in anticipation
    of your cuming

    Put you on the
    pedestal
    suspended in mid air
    as I stared -- and
    asked questions of
    WHAT
    WHEN
    HOW
    WHERE; and
    WHY ~ knot ~
    love N2~ scraps
    of worn yarn--?

    I miss you - Love you, I ~~
    Do you know how much?

    Guessin' you have not
    a clue...
    when my soul speaks
    what my thoughts
    have revealed

    ...and there's no one
    listening to hear...
    how I feel


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Because they are felt, expressions like these are always heard.
    nice piece.
    BE
     
  3. Thandiwe

    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What makes it even harder
    finding the words which can say it all
    and sometimes there are no words
    which means the feelings still go uncommunicated...
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    Why thank you for the comps!

    Your wordz are appreciated!

    1.
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Better yet

    sista Thandiwe..... the words are spoken, directly, but the recipient fails to really 'hear' what truly is being said!

    Soliloquy - speaking to one's self...!

    1 :heart: sista-friend....

    (when we gon' hang out?)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep sight well felt deep within
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'M LISTENING DO NOT FRET!!!!!!!!!!
    This was a beautiful poem miss very beautiful and the emotion was clear
    Flow on Sis
    ~Peace love and Blessings~
     
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