Black Poetry : Soliloquy..for Lack Of A Better Title

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hark....
    What light does disturb my revelry~
    It appears, it is the day....
    ..Come to break up the magnificent dream~
    That has ensconced my slumber....
    ..So real it were that~
    I, could feel your warm inviting breath....
    ..On the head of my......paps~
    Causing them to stiffen and stir....
    ..In the hopes of finding their way~
    Into the nurturing confines of your....
    Wonderful mouth..slaked by your delicious tongue!

    But wait....
    As sleep's fog relinquishes it's hold~
    On my once enshrouded brain....
    ..I discover to my ethereal delight~
    That it twas nary a dream at all....
    ..As your fingers did continue to caress and carouse~
    The areas attuned to bringing about....
    ..A focal point to be neither denied, or ignored~
    And to our utter amazement....
    ..The rise and fall of love's project~
    Continued....for hours....
    ..Oh, to behold what inspiration..can accomplish!

    I thank you for touching me....
    Where very few, if memory serves~
    Or better still, none to recall....
    ..Ever did before!~
    And after this frenetic, energetic....
    ..Multi-tasked endeavor of emotional..physical release~
    20 minutes of cuddling/recovery is all that will be necessary....
    ..To show you, assist you in feeling~
    Greater than you have made me!!

    SAARONCROWELL
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  2. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this.....

    This was a baaaaaad poem, shakespearean in style, I was most pleasantly impressed ....4 :spinstar: status definitely....


    epiphany :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Saaron,

    (((BRAVO))) Poetry Classical Style. :toast:

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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