Black Poetry : SOLID!

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I recovered my best friend
    she has been with me
    since the very beginning.
    I recall many times she
    suggested sound advice,
    but I refused to listen.
    youth and a hard head
    was fashionable then and
    I admit....

    I insisted on calling all the shots

    I have matured since then,
    learned to appreciate,
    to respect and value her.
    besides, she's cool!
    we share quality time and
    goof around at times.

    she's direct and to the point
    has no problem putting me in check,
    gives her opinion, even if it hurts
    or doesn't coincide with mine
    and that's fine, because I know
    how to compromise....

    now

    she and I get into some deep
    conversations, about the
    going ons in today's world.
    had our fair share of disputes.
    there are times I attentively
    listen to her, other times
    I completely ignore her....

    ~that is no easy task~

    she comforts me to relieve
    my stress, assures me
    everything will workout
    for the best.
    she gives me reason
    together we rhyme
    bind for an eternity
    me and my mind,

    ~WE SOLID~



    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN
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  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knowledge of SELF
    the ability to challenge SELF
    the need to push and pull SELF

    inner struggles are what push us to be more than we are.

    be as one with thy MIND, poet.

    SOLID.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you came to visit.
    I always :) when you
    drop by. And your reply,
    SOLID!

    Thanks for the love,
    it's returned. :heart:


    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS ILL GIRL THOUGHT AT FIRST YOU WERE SPEKING OF YOUR MOTHER BUT WHEN YOU SAID

    THAT WAS ILL GIRL THOUGHT AT FIRST YOU WERE SPEKING OF YOUR MOTHER BUT WHEN YOU SAID YALL RHYME TOGETHER KINDA CONFUSED THEN IN THE LAST LINE YOU TOLD IT ALL YOUR MIND BABY GIRL THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL PIECE ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH
     
  5. StarDancer

    StarDancer Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte.....had to stop and think a second and catch my breath before i could find the courage to finish....

    wish i knew myself that well!

    **pondering**
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really love this poem. I have a friend exactly like this...exactly.
    May I print this poem and give it to her? Pretty please? Of course, your name will appear as the author...you know dat. :)
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER~
    I'm happy you popped in
    and even happier you
    enjoyed the read. :)

    Star~
    I'm still learning.
    Glad you felt the flo. :)

    Joyce~
    Sure you may.
    I'm pleased you
    enjoyed it.

    Thanks for the love yall.
    It's returned. :heart:


    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    nice

    dssNY
    feeling the growth
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    self control ........dis piece is well felt sistah poetess....
     
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    MsPoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    NICE TWIST
    THAT IS TALENT AT IT'S BEST !
    POETIC
     
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