Black Poetry : Solemn Lullabies

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SistaMoon, Aug 31, 2002.

  1. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart dreamt of you
    My mind desired you
    And when I first laid eyes on you
    My soul just wept
    It was sad that somehow, I couldnt feel you
    See i was stripped of that some time ago
    That sense was no longer around
    So all I could do was stare at you
    With my solemn eyes and hope you would realize how desperatley I craved you and your every emotion
    I wished for you to be the one to fulfill my needs
    I wanted to bleed thick drops of melancholy
    because you never tried to rescue me
    I thought you were my hero....
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep piece
    lovin the coolness of your flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was down deep and very tyght
     
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    Sista Sista...

    The flow was definitely subtle... Loved the language!

    Reas
     
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