Black Poetry : Soldier of Fortune

[1poetsought]

A soldier rhymes to past the time it's like
Boot camp spit & shine alright
Friendly fire!
Psyche, it's time to write
I'm hyped...
Men will die tonight

Word is born...
Newbie kids delight
If this kicks ~
The baby lives to fight

Man alive if that don't fly your kite
Visualize....
Might night vision bite?


Darryl Abdu Omari
aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005

 

[Joyce]

Hello deep thinker...enjoyed the read on this piece. So beautifully written that the reader feels that which he cannot explain...hmmm. Now ain't dat a thought. ​

 

[$$RICH$$]

this took me under mentally love how your pen talk in tongue brutha whewwwwwww!!!

 

[watzinaname]

I guess that is what life is like to a soldier, not knowing if it will be their turn to die tonight or not. Thanks for giving us something else to ponder poet.

 

[Ireadastory]

Ok my brotha, I must be honest I didn't quite understand this piece. I had to read it twice and I still don't get it, however, it is something about this piece that I like, if that makes sense. Maybe it's the flow or the fact that it makes me think about it. Whatever it is I like it. So flow on!