Black Poetry : Solace in your arms

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I need to
    find solace so deep
    within your arms
    that I hear the ocean
    talk to me in surround sound
    because the sounds that
    surround me are not that of
    peace but many pieces
    of chaos combined to
    form a chain that
    connects me to life's
    anvil burying me
    into the tears of a dying
    sun...my body is
    weak my spirit fatigued
    and my voice mute
    .....muted tones of
    fallen leaves leave me
    fallen before the altar
    asking God why the
    season of circumstance
    has changed to this....
    circumcision has left the
    trees bare and my
    thoughts are subject
    to observation and judgment
    ....convicted to time behind
    burnt out stars and listening
    to out of tune Xylophone bars
    that pronounce sadness
    and I dance off beat beaten
    tired and looking for your
    arms to get lost in.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    How exquisite this piece is... "delicately written"!

    :wink:


    One.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    EXTREMELY TYGHT FLOW
    U GONNA HAVE EVERY LADY RUNNING AT YA
    JUST THINK OF ME AND SAVE ME ONE
    COZ DES BE THE BOMB!!:heart:
     
  4. Tyrone

    Tyrone Active Member MEMBER

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    Blak!

    I'm relating to the extreme need a man has for the deep embrace. No words, just the feminine caress ~ just the eternal fullness and goodness of the heart sounds inside soft breasts.

    Ah yes.

    Ty
     
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    fall deeply into me
    my arms held open for
    you to rest in
    i be that comfort place
    i be that escape from this
    day to day rat race
    i be that private beach
    for you to swim
    i be that well that quenches
    you of all thirst
    you need not look another
    place for
    i be that
    indigo woman
    you lose yourself in...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NesS....


    <<<< done hit da floor... :)

    yeah. that's ryght. i think i musta fainted...
    or BLaKed out for a mo-ment. this was so
    beautiful... i'm almost afraid to breathe.

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "convicted to time behind
    burnt out stars and listening
    to out of tune Xylophone bars"

    loved the entire flow, this here just reached out and slapped me silly...tyme behind burt outs yeah brotha I been there before




    One
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep Solace

    There is an extra element here that makes this flow so readable and I suspect that the element is a piece of yourself--a piece of truth about the writer--well done--Amun-Ra:cool:
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    like the imagination

    on this piece meaning the way it was worded

    and every soldier needs a hug once in awhile

    so i ain't mad at cha
    peace
     
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