Black Poetry : Softly Spoken Loud!!!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Skip formalities and Senseless introductions
    I emerge VICTORIOUS
    from a hostile society
    gravely ill from
    irrepressable hopes
    and generic food for thought
    who would have thought
    youthful rages
    would make poetic voice
    permissable
    opposed to DISSmissable
    **** 3!
    I`m 4,5,6 Dimensional
    with GREAT certainty
    I-AM-POSSIBLE
    inflicted upon you
    with INGENIOUS rhymes
    leaving you tangled and bonded
    leaving you behind
    in dizzying patterns of metaphoric vines
    motion perpetual is substantial and crucial
    to my existence
    WHIRLWIND of promiscuity
    ECSTASY
    gracefully
    LINGERING, LINGERING, L I N G E R I N G
    masquerade and parade of
    fake and phonies
    and bubblegum antics
    firmly entrenched and
    aptly expressed
    and relegated to esoteric discussion
    see...
    my revolution
    counters the counter-revolution
    my revolution
    is signifying
    verifying
    glorifying
    and is non-politically instructive
    POL-I-TICS
    me off because
    my revolution
    is prolific
    philosophic
    virtually upper class
    ghetto prophetic
    **** LOVE!
    its pathetic
    so **** pathetic
    what feels REAL...isn`t
    and what doesnt...REALLY isn`t
    drunk and belligerent
    from these nouns/Adjective and verbs
    commonality is absurd
    and lies hurt
    my slurred words
    paint explict scenes
    exposing my testicles
    pulsing veins in phallic spectacles
    erect and direct
    adverse effects of neglect
    ****
    what the hell do you expect?
    a hushed voice or passivity?
    REALITY is the remedy
    by which we view and accept
    our own IDIOSYNCRASIES
    behold
    beheld
    slippery
    exposed
    exploited
    skimmed
    sampled
    savored
    SOUL of a man
    please don`t cry or cringe
    introspection
    pinpoints where i end
    and the psychosis
    begins...
     
  2. OneTyme.

    OneTyme. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TYTE!

    Handle yo business poet.:toast:
     
  3. Poetic Mind

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    WHOA!

    all I can say playa is wow! I LOVE IT!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya off da hook wit dis one

    tyght flow of perfection !!:toast:
     
  5. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ONETYME~ Yo i try to...dats all we can ask, no? LOL thanks for da read!

    PoeticMind~ Thanks for ingesting this peace!

    $$RICH$$~ Now u always readin me...i gotta return da favor cuz i've been laggin...but believe it or not...i freestyled this at a SLAM and wrote it down from mah tape recorder...i get annointed in poetic verse.

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u did it in a slammmmm!!

    wish i was there coz i know u rocked da house wit dis one
    big ups too u my brutha in vibe :D
     
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    i can image...

    you at an open mic night
    pouring these words
    on the audience...

    my lighter lit for you, poet~
     
  8. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ & MsDlite~ I was FEELIN' it thoroughly...just tryna get back in da groove cuz mah spoken word was takin a back seat to mah otha s**t for far too long...feelz me? I'm still waitin on dat DESTEE FORUMZ poetry slam...and da DESTEE FORUMZ spoken word CD :)

    LOVE y'all!!!
     
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    Dyme,

    You sent this to me with the extreme signal. I felt it and I didn't even have to close my eyes. Electrifying piece! I'd love to read more of you.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    2G

    this was
    DEEP DEEP DEEP
    man

    you know

    don't cry for me

    DSSNY
    peace
     
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