Black Poetry : soaking in the moment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jul 8, 2007.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liquify love.
    warm current of scented emtions wrap around me
    as i look down at my nakedness
    i see gaps in my position
    that i only wish u
    were here to fill
    matching my body with yours
    interlocking physical and mental
    for purity
    the cause so purely for pleasure
    and so pleasurable
    for life
    stimulating my insides
    u engulf me
    my mystery
    leaving my with as many questions
    as those u've jut answered
    so many mixed feelings
    like the imprint u left
    footprints on my mind
    and so i ponder....
    soaking in these warm sented currents
    thinking about u
    lingr to each moment
    because time skips no beat
    what do u feel
    are u thinking pleasant thoughts
    wondering
    visioning me?
    am i alone
    happy because u r my new hobby
    and without ur personality
    my day seems a little dull
    and so i go back to my initiall attemtp
    to picture u here with me
    orsimply not picture u gone
    ad life would be easy
    if i could have my way
    my current would be contempt
    my emtotions wouldnt sway
    and u would be here
    filling the empty voids throughout my day
    simply wit ur smile
    starting today
    joining me in my liquified love
    warm scented current unitin us
    matching my curiousity
    with temtpation fullfilled
    and a new day couldnt be visioned so better
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As so captured are ya words
    But where are now
    I think of you sometimes
    But to hear the voice of you
    Is a pleasure aroused

    So sweet
    To know me off my feet

    With the tune of your beat
    Make my memories complete.


    Coo flow.

    Loved it.

    D.S.
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daroc:
    This piece is filled with passion.
    Love can be so wonderful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i love this so welcome back in flow daroc nice to see yo ink drippin
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the word play with the liquified current, poetess. Very nice to read you again, welcome back!!!
     
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