Black Poetry : So............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Aug 20, 2006.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My universe is doing crazy things
    Since your face entered my dreams you take me all in
    When you look at me
    And I get chills all up and down my spine
    I know we're supposed to take
    our time but I don't want to
    I fear that if I wait too long
    I'll lose my chance to stay near you
    I don't really ask for a lot these days
    I just want to see your face
    And then maybe hear your voice
    I ain't sprung I just know what I like
    And what I like is that
    You make me feel
    all right with me
    It's a common mistake to think that
    life is great when you're on top of the world
    and everything is fine
    But in my mind
    Life is great when
    one is strugglin'
    To survive the fight
    You see cause those are the times when
    You appreciate feeling anything at all
    And right now I'm low but I apprecitate
    You even more b/c you help me feel somethin
    again
    So.....................
    the question is can we pick up where we left off
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a beautiful piece poet
    espicially when some gives you that feeling
    8/10
    uno
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes we can.....this was caressingly sweet
     
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    Girl, this piece was haunting. I, too had a dream of a fantasy lover...lol...this mystery man turned out to be my current:spinstar:...oh how I love a love "mystery"...our :hearts: and imaginations hold so many potentialities....Dream on sis....for every dream manifests to reality...in it's own way:sand:

    :hearts2:

    :picture:
     
  5. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh sistah spice this was more than just a dream I'm actually living the loving I'm speakin of and you know what it is a great wonder this guy stayed around as long as he did but I'm really glad he did.