Black Poetry : So you say........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Mar 1, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So you say you got it going on
    It seems all playas be singing that same [email protected] song

    So you say your d is big
    Once when I saw what your working I compared it to a twig

    So you say you can make me holler
    Take that itty-bitty back so here's your @ss a dollar

    To buy back what you lost
    Did you keep the rest of you on frost

    So you say shawty swing my way
    Well here's a rain check for me to pass on this for anotha day

    There's no sense in wasting my time
    You short a nickel n***a not completely a dime

    So you say I'm talking too much Sh*t
    Your ex told me how you be braggin on that little d

    So you say Im just to big
    Its just too much for you to dig

    Let me tell ya playboy I like DJ's but neva a scribble
    I like n***a's to make slam dunks and not alot of dribbles

    So before you brag on something that ain't there
    Beware of gurlz lke me who have you running scared

    I'll holla at cha playa
    So you say.................

    This is my followed up to my poem i posted called so-called men.
    :bullseye:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow poet
    Yup playas play mami
    Much love on your poetic drop
    Sister Nevar
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt all dis here , them wannabe's always come up short a dime or two.
     
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    I like this flow girl!
    Nice drop nevar:hearts4:
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TIGHT POEM NEVAR SEE YOU HAD TO LET OUT SOME STEAM. NOT MAD AT IT JUST KEEP WRITING WITH YOUR HEART WHERE EVER IT LEADS YOU.
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... so... um... I guess a date is out the question. I'm playin.
    It's all love, love.
    Flo on poet.
    One love
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to rich thanks for showing me love

    to tant your comments always appreciated

    to cursed heart thanks for the visit love ya always

    to my poetic boo blacksoul thanks for being so understanding i know you'll hold me down no matter what my flavor is

    and to skrybble didnt i tell you i like a dj naw just kidding anytime baby anytime. thanks for showing me some love
    :thanks: :luvu: :dance: :couple:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this!!!!!!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to sweetbabyface thanks babygurl for showing me some love again

    G-14 im waiting to take a peek at them files anyway thanks for giving me some love honey holla at cha!!!!!!!!!
    :love: