Quiet Poetry Lounge : so who is????

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Mar 27, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who is loving you?
    Not a tear not even a sad face…
    But who loving you?
    Tryin to be real…
    Flowing in the real..
    Holding on a dream
    Feelin ya vibe….
    Enhancing and loving the thrill…
    But who is loving you?
    Do you know can you feel
    You can search reach deny
    And run….
    But who is loving you?
    When your wrong or right
    Standing by your side….
    Helping you fight the battle no matter
    What it is…
    Who
    I say who
    Whoooooooo’s loving you?
    Wipe the tears…..
    Place a smile…
    Support
    Cherish
    And knows….
    Who is loving you…..
    looking
    feeling……just knowing
    Blue is the sky as the earth dance
    And playing our song in the wind…
    Who is loving you
    Know the hearts have meet
    And the soul knows…
    As the spirit lifts and
    Feel the blessing….
    So who is loving you?
    Yeah who is loving you?
    For you
    And nothing else…..
    Whoooooooooo’s loving you….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't know who but dis was tyte
    flow head on poetess
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya
    thanks Rich..glad ya likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    wonderful poem sister angel
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support sis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    what a question..
    who is loving you.
    very nice piece..
    understanding it..
    nice..
    thanks for sharing
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for takin time to read
    Much love to ya
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Who's loving you...y -e -s...who ?
    when you come home and choose to lie instead of telling the truth ?
    when ALL turn their back on you ?
    when sweat drops from your head with fever ?
    and when everything around you crumbles to the ground...who's STILL loving you ?
    ANGEL...thanks for making my day...I like it and I felt it.
    my luv to ya :heart: ... :heart: Tswana
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice. Love the flow and the feel of the poem. I am loving this poem. Angel does it again and again.
     
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    Ahhhhhh! Who is loving you?
    A question rarely asked in todays society.
    Everyones seems in such a hurry and seems
    to ask this question after the bed has been made.
    I loved the way you flowed this piece!
    :hot: :hot: :hot: