Black Poetry : So what is life really about?

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    People always say it's all about individuality,
    when deep down it should be about the personality.
    It's all about you hang with,
    also about who has that 'bit'.
    Also, I heard it's about the bling-bling,
    and at that moment....whose the fling-fling?
    Today many people try to justify the cause,
    but how can they...when everybody think they're the boss?
    Today too many liars,
    but not enough real 'fighters'.
    This society is such a lie,
    where real love is about to die.....
    When can we live in a paradise,
    where everybody won't be giving me advice?
    They say they are in control,
    but they know deep down their assets are 'froze'.
    People these days are phony not real,
    but always talking about how they got the 'magic feel'.
    Well... I got a dream of where this society will change,
    into something better....and it won't be a phase.
    Also.... where people are realistic and kind,
    where real love will be able to find.....
    I just want people to think,
    because life changes alot, even when a person blinks?
    So do you want a society.....that is full of secrets and lies,
    or a society where you got to think but makes you cry?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' yesssssssssssssssssss! i'm so feel u here
    dis what i'm talking bout keep talking to me
    coz i'm sho nuff listening ....yes yes yes !!!!!

    say it so they all may hear
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you touch my heart
    on this one sistah
    nice scribe
    Peace
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow..

    Why can't we live in a paradise.. that would so nice. No need to ask twice.

    Well... I got a dream of where this society will change,
    into something better....and it won't be a phase.

    Lets us have that dream.. sounds nice.
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks.... guys.....
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm hearin ya, girl. Frustrates the hell outta me too, things do.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow...
     
  8. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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