Quiet Poetry Lounge : So Well You Know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 27, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So Well You Know

    Instincts tell you of ill blowing winds
    Winds that surround me
    Restricting my flow
    I never have to say
    For so well you know

    Sharp eyes
    Sharper ears
    So well you know my heart
    What I think
    What I fear

    Life
    So unforgiving
    So demanding
    Yet, there you are
    With loving support
    Sincere is your understanding

    Feeling me
    Judgment free
    However I am
    However I go
    It’s me
    So well you love
    So well you know

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "there is

    an invisible umbilicus through
    which we feed and nourish each other"
    a joining at the heart of our souls
    more than two ordinary lovers
    there is a spiritual tie that binds
    an emotional connection
    there is a symbiotic relationship
    that always needs protection
    our call to love was preordained in
    eternity long ago
    and there will never be one thing
    about 'us' we won't KNOW...

    thank you for your continued inspiration BE

    :heart:

    A
     
  3. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat &

    Miss A...

    your flows are genuinely beautiful standing alone ~ but oh the texture you bring when you flow together.

    Thank you BE; your piece confirms she knows all she ever needs to know.

    Peace & PLENTY Poetry,

    T
     
  4. Destee

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    love like this is rare
    so very rare ...

    Wonderful Poets!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    And let it be so...Nice one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome so be it.......
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To love despite and just because...wonderfully posed.
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I still

    love this....

    beautiful!

    alyce
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i gotta say again, after all these years, I STILL love this! :)
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed one of the great classic ever written