Black Poetry : So Son Shine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Dec 2, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try to rob me of my thoughts
    I wish I had a witness!
    To testify
    In my response
    I hear you loud and clear
    And the bible says that
    Revenge is mine thus sayeth the Lord
    So I'll just mind my own business
    And let the Lord work it out in time
    So Son Shine your light
    Joy comes in the morning
    Through the terror of the night
    Peace let me be surrounded my your presence
    Peace let me take one look at you
    And embrace your fullness
    So son shine on me
    Now that I have come out of the dark
    Replenish my spirit
    Elevate my mind
    Give me a purpose and a future
    Something to live for
    All of my mind
    I am searching endlessly
    Don't leave me behind
    I want to live
    I still I must die
    To sin
    And take up my cross and follow you Lord
    Be with me
    Help me to take my time
    Something REAL
    No one can take from me
    Even if they tried
    I worship you
    In the midst of all hopelessness
    You are forever mine
    So son shine!
     
  2. NICELOCKS820

    NICELOCKS820 Member MEMBER

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    I like the positiviti in this piece! I'm feelin this...flow on fellow poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    storm may i stand up wit a AMEN !!!!
    i feel ya all da way down !
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$$$$$ Richely Done$$$$$$$

    Rich,
    This was very nice and I am with you on the positive side of things, We are nothing with God and we must always keep the faith. NICE..

    Be Blessed
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you betta PREACH this thang.....Giving you a shonuff AMEN on this one.......time to pass the offering plate....
     
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