Black Poetry : So now I'm A.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternal, Apr 19, 2002.

  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum baby...ooh I am gonna love you forever and ever...
    Remember sayin that??

    Well I do, hell I said it too
    But the difference between me and you

    Is that I say nothing I Don't mean
    And if you think you'll make me green
    With your little show, your new h*%
    Your used car and house when
    You're only as smart as that mouse
    That people in the ghetto catch in sticky traps
    Found yo self in a bad situation cause you had weak rap
    I...WILL...NOT.....LOSE MYSELF in your bull
    And if you think your lines, oops, lies are gonna pull
    Me back into your game
    You got life twisted, all women ain't the same.
    You are so used to dealing with little girls'
    Whose only purpose in life is to rock your world
    Then messed up and put a Woman in the mix
    And failed to turn off the small brain in your ****
    OOPS...your bad. And thats sad cause my time
    Just went from true devotion and given back to mine
    And trust ain't comin a dime a thought these days.
    So believe me, everything from here on is on my way or say
    I do not care about your egotistical crap
    On your way to find the REAL, you lost the map
    Then you want to come back to me to show you the steps
    SAt by my side with puppydog eyes and wept
    And yes, baby I shed a tear. For me, its the end.
    You have just lost nurturer, confidant and friend
    But thats your problem you caused all this ****.
    Oh WeLl, tears dropped, sweetheartexittotheleft
    ENTER *****.
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ouch! ouch! ouch!!!...whoo, steppin on toes all over the place, too much, too little, too late...

    i can dig it!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  3. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks DJ

    lol lol...it happens sometimes, just this way...
    E
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    whhhhhhooooaaa!!

    don't let him get to you now

    this was heated :flame:

    you just lit my cigarette and
    i don't even smoke :smokin: :lol:

    peace

    poeticd :)
     
  5. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, PoeticD, he won't, he never has...just thinking about a friend situation
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eternal,

    Now that's right!!!

    I likes this here!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you GQ, long time no hear from!!
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem, loved it.
    Yay to the power of women.
    You're a better person for not letting him beat u down.
    *Emma*
     
  9. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx, enjoying your work as well poetess!!
    E