Black Poetry : so now i am feeling all pure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Oct 6, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so now i am feeling all pure
    but slightly reckless
    and happy, yes, happy
    because i am no longer straddling a fence
    and on top of that, my heart is in a good place
    so outside of writing poetry
    ordering some chinese egg rolls
    helping my sons with their homework
    what is my next move?

    is it a slow groove
    is it listening to some downloads
    is it lying in bed next to you with my legs wrapped around yours
    is it kissing your dark skin
    is it making love to you free from sin
    i dunno, let me start again

    i have prayed and prayed for this release
    and finally it came to me
    on a bed of roses
    after being torn for so long
    my prayers were answered
    a mutual understanding
    how cool is that

    so let me get these egg rolls
    let me sit down next to you
    see how your day was
    watch you smile and rest in the comfort
    of your love
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow like this
     
  3. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto, thank you, it was a good day.
    mzblkangel - thanks!
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ma,i would die for sumthin' like this....
    thats whut fam is all about..the little stuff....im happy to know that you get to enjoy the simple pleasures of having a family and being able to feel good about
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ma,i would die for sumthin' like this....
    thats whut fam is all about..the little stuff....im happy to know that you get to enjoy the simple pleasures of having a family and being able to feel good about it...most families out there(like mine) for instance fight over the lil stuff,but to me the little stuff is whut you'll always remember....like helping your children do their homework....or just chillin' in your bedroom eatiNg an eggroll while ya man is smoking a j and both a yall just cracking up over whut yall are watchin on the tube....to dimming the lights and gettin you romance on......thats exactly whut i want when i start up my own fam and this piece right here just gave me the ultimate inspiration...thanx love....



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