Black Poetry : So My Brother Says

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me please I would like to be alone.
    For you to be around me I am taking a chance
    on letting you into my heart and my rooms are limited.
    Most people have hearts that have many rooms
    and could love multiple of people and still have room for more.
    I am the opposite, my rooms are numbered and they are few.
    Once you move in it is yours for life.
    There are no refunds or any evictions.
    So if you are not ready to stay for life,
    excuse me please for I would like to be alone.

    © 2012 Kenneth R. Coleman
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can relate.............
     
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    well said.
     
  4. TotalView

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    Brother Poet $$RICH$$ and Sister Poet Candeesweet,

    Thank you. I really like this piece and decided to share it. I will pass along your words.

    (smile)
     
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    Now,
    that's pretty deep.
     
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    very nice !
     
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    Precious Black Man,

    On behalf of my brother, I thank you. As you can see I am not the most prolific writer in my family.

    (smile)
     
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    Thank you MsVeraisblessed. I will tell him you said so.

    (smile)
     
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