Black Poetry : So Much.. So Many

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the day we are born we start loosing things

    As we grow we loose countless blessings, moments, people and things.

    First we loose our innocence as a child, and then we loose the baby teeth we had for while

    Along the way we loose friends we hold dear, we loose time every second

    As life goes on every day.

    They teach us to count days and years but the lost really keeps the pace.

    Loosing socks in the dryer, loosing keys to the freaking car

    I even lost my hair :10200:

    Loosing money, loosing lovers it never seems to go away

    Trying to hold onto much of it

    Will drive you in the ground.

    So we either keep starting over

    Some of it isn’t recoverable at all

    So along the way we hope that it will end but there’s no end in sight

    Looses mount up all around us, like the dark streets do at night

    A wall of clouds.

    The loses seem so endless

    That one can’t but help to scream and ask

    Why it all ways seem to happen, thinking it only happens to us

    Just to share and let me tell you

    In this post you’re not alone.

    We all keep loosing many things from birth until were gone.


     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we come here with the skin on our backs...and the fuzz on our heads. we will leave the same way. in between, we gain many things...none of which we can take with us when we leave. Hopefully, we enjoy the gains...and appreciate when they go away. A SEASON FOR ALL THINGS. just as others will appreciate us when we go away.

    interesting introspective.

    *pondering*
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As humans we have to learn to let go and let God there is always a reason why things and ppl come and go just trust and believe...we come in this world alone and we leave alone.
     
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