Black Poetry : so much more...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, Apr 18, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    she had asked him to marry her
    she was feelin good
    he was feelin good
    they had just made good
    love

    he looked at her and
    smiled...
    'you sure don't want much'...
    was his reply

    days and months passed
    even years

    and now she remembers
    and she re-lives
    and she rehearses
    his movements
    his smiles
    his eyes in the heat
    of tender moments
    that lasted
    ~forever~

    and realizes
    he'd given her
    so much more

    than she could ever ask for


    hadassah
     
  2. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl,

    I've been reading you and there's a special kind of 'thing' you do that's working for me. Thank you for coming and blessing with your soul, your spirit.

    CELA
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow,thank you for this one. I can see where this relates in a biblical sense. ~Masterpiece~ and very true. Scribe on my sistah scribe on.
    Desert Storm

    Jeremiah 29:11
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U JUST DESPLAYED A MASTERPIECE THANX
    AND FLOW ON!!
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaking...

    ...my head in agreement with the RICHNESS. Very thorough piece, scribe...
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hadassah,

    Feelin' ya on this. Enjoyed my very first read of ya!!!

    Look forward ta more!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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