Black Poetry : So Many Rivers

[$$RICH$$]

word up this was tyte bruh wow
ya pen on fire and bring depth to
the page keep flowing

 

[greggy]

that was a delight to read. Rivers are such a powerful metaphor.

...
So many rivers
Awash in seas
Are casualties
Through history
... / ...
So many rivers
A quiver keeps
Defending me
The levy steep
But dam,

I'm free ~

Darryl Abdu Omari :deal:
aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004

 

[deepy]

i agree with the above...rivers such a powerful metaphor..
may me think you should come join us in Haiku...something about the way you pen makes me think you might enjoy some of that l7 syllable flow...

 

[Legacy21]

1 Poet as usual your words hold me arrest from start to compelling finish. Signature style indeed. Peace

 

[1poetsought]

So many rivers past all of that... akin to noble shores

Thank you, brothers and sisters.