Black Poetry : So Like....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 21, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the way he made me feel was like
    fifty-million shots of....ahhhhh..
    that splashed against my face
    and whispered sweetly in from the inside...

    hips sway as the grass does
    in the summer mourning
    when the Sun is jus waking up and
    still has crust in its eyes...
    (*yyyawwwwnnnn*)

    i liked to touch the area's of his spine
    cauzing him to have blind shiver's of ohhhhh....
    to run up his spine hysterically...

    it was sooo good...
    i could just (dayum baby)and come........
    and come........
    and come........

    i would try to submerge into his brow
    and reconnect the electrons that made the protons
    that sang to the atoms that made me...jus chill

    to be continued.....
    (ima finish this later)
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so like....A HOT SHOWER

    lol girl this what I feel like when I'm takin a bath... I like it lol :hot: :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every drop marks a reason
    to make da body feel divine
    very nicely done ya very crafty
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol@ sensual...thanks for feelin me on this
    thanks for he love rich...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Ms.Story
    Gurl! This
    was all so visual!
    Loved it!
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah-gurl glad u was feelin my flow
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the feelings were blooming all over the place, very nice.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow lil sis im QQ'n u... nice work indeed
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lolQpythin QQin lol thanks for feelin me yall
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol the way you write i gotta step back look and jus :jawdrop: lol flow on mijita