Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 21, 2001.
...holding back the tears...
...just a waste of energy
when the love's so good...
Alyce, (c) 2001
Honey Hush Yo Mouth
You painted a beauty with these here 17 syallables. I have been in that painting and it is a most beautiful place to be.
Keep revealing your flow honey.
you've covered a whole lot in three lines..
and I just love the title...
yes, alyce...very nicely done. i'm lovin' it!
Few words required!
I am feeling ya! And I like the way you did that...brief but deep!
it took me a nano-second to
let this soak into my mental Ms. A.
WOW!!!! **** I miss this!
...ain't dat da truth!!
it just don't make no sense how you do this here.
Had To Read Dis Again Honey
Revisiting poetically...experiencing...literally. My, my, my, my, my.
Separate names with a comma.