Black Poetry : So Into You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I get lost
    Just watching
    My reflection in those beautiful green eyes
    The feel of your soft lips
    On mine
    Blows me totally away
    But then I cringe at the thought
    Of being hurt just one more time
    Having my heart ripped out
    And stepped on again,
    I've learned that love is not my friend
    But I don't know where to begin
    Or end
    These feelings I feel for you
    I'm shook to death of you
    You make me feel
    Like the only girl
    In the world
    That has captured your heart
    And can feel your pain
    Just don't kiss me again
    And maybe I'll be able to regain
    My sences
    That I left in your arms
    When you held me close to you
    And maybe I'll be able to forget
    Your fingers in my hair
    And our tongues playing tug-of-war
    On the living room floor
    If it's just talk
    Lord let me forget everything he says
    Pay no mind to the feel of his dreads
    As I run my fingers through
    And through
    Wanting to be at the center of you
    Is the only thing I think about
    Without a doubt
    I'm so into you. :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    trueLove ...........within da heart
    so into u
    sometime blindly
    eyes can't see
    u hear the whispers
    of what should be
    yes u so into thee

    this was a love compassionate flow
    and so beautifully pose'd
    the kiss of bliss do it every time........lol
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$RICH$$ you always make me feel so good about my work!
     
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    the art
    of get'n caught up...
    this was really nice...
    keep scribe'n sis
    peace
    khasm
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Khasm...that means a lot coming from you. :)
     
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    This was wonderful, true love!!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you suddenpassion...i'm glad you liked it.
     
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    TRUE LOVE ...true love

    Very Sweet. True love.

    Don't ever be afraid to get caught in the rain.
    The wet cold to the bone of love again.
    It warms as long as it can be there.
    Traveling wind that seems not to care.
    Love happens when we have other plans.
    Disrupt your thinking cause your at it's command.
    To those your captured and caught you in a snare.

    Love. TRUE LOVE
    will always be there. :heart:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee...I cannot thank you enough for that. Such sweet and encouraging words. I promise to take your advice. Not sure I'll follow it, but I'll take it. :). Thank you so much for reading this and feeling this. Your words always mean so much to me.
     
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    jeee if i had readed this i think 3 years ago....it would have decribed a feeling Strong that i had for this man back than....
    it brings back memories of him....
    it hurts but i did like youre scribe..sister..

    feld it...

    keep on keep on
    Love L
     

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