Black Poetry : ...so i'll just lay here...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i haven't posted a song in while so here is one that i wrote a few weeks ago...its actually one of my favorites i got to get in the studio and put this sensual track behind it....i wish ya'll could here it...but for rite now, here are the lyrics...ENJOY!



    Verse 1:

    alone is how i lay
    on a day like today
    alone is how i am
    i've done everthing i can
    alone is how i hurt
    cuz everything seems to desert
    alone is how i feel
    cuz nothing seems real


    Chorus:

    so i'll just lay here
    swallowed in my tears
    crawlin' in hurt and
    feelin' unalert and
    so i'll just cry here
    tryin' to taunt my fears
    and i'll just be here
    (tonight)
    so i'll just lay here


    Verse 2:

    i'm sorry to do this
    to worry you like, like this
    i only have one wish
    that my life would be normally fit
    i don't wanna live like this no more
    i don't wanna live like i can't go no more
    i don't wanna cry another night
    cuz alone gets me feelin' unalive
    and i don't really feel like dying
    i just wanna live my life in spite of
    the hurt and the pain
    and the taunts and the rain
    i'm just gonna lay here
    Lord please take all this pain

    (back to chorus)

    Hook:

    I'm just gonna lay here tonight
    baby
    i'm just gonna be alone tonight
    you see
    i have been alone all my life
    baby
    so its not hard for me to say goodbye
    you see?

    (back to chorus a couple of times...)
     
  2. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Im loving this, this is tyte!!!!keep it coming Sis!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks girl:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o yes tyte indeed u made another drop to the top of da chart
     
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    this was tight
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] gurllll TURN IT UP :)
     
  7. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep stirrings of an emotional dish tahat was delicious.

    Blessings on ya house, oh lovely golden queen!!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...what a song it would make! can't wait to hear it with music.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww thanks everybody:)
     
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