Black Poetry : So Good to Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweetlylost, Aug 5, 2003.

  1. sweetlylost

    sweetlylost New Member MEMBER

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    I miss those times
    when you would call
    me just to see
    what i was doing
    whisper sweet nothings
    in my ears
    tell me I was beautiful
    and everything else
    i loved to hear
    even when i looked my
    worst
    telling me you loved me
    when i didnt believe
    you because i hadnt
    told you first
    making love to me as
    if it was our first time
    giving me gifts
    for being me and
    loving you when
    nobody else
    cared or gave their
    time being their for
    you when nobody else
    was there
    now here i sit sad because
    its just a memory
    hoping you will come back
    to me...
    that sweet man
    that was so good to me

    Much Love
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah...a dream :)...lots of if only's in this one..i like it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we all have faced this here
    so much missed
    like dis flow
     
  4. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can realate and it's hard when those feelings are gone. I really like this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling it alot and understand
    more then i can say
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh yes beautiful for real and...just in case i aint said so...
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    HIIIIIIIIIIIII :)
    lol