Black Poetry : So, don't forget me if i die.

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  1. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in my present life
    i know i cannot love another
    i do not have another heart to give to anyone
    my heart belongs to you, and to you alone

    you know
    i would look after you,
    do all your bidding
    sit beside you,
    at your feet or where you want me to.
    i would do what you asked anytime of day
    anything you wanted no matter what it be.

    so if i die before you
    do please remember this
    i will never stop loving you even after death.......

    you will feel my presence
    no matter where you are
    i have not come to haunt you
    just to be with you far across the sea
    in the land i tell you where i ought to be
    i know it is my destiny to be there one day
    till then this is what will be..


    when you smell my perfume
    you will know i'm near
    watching over you
    the woman i love so dear
    i know you will be seeing me
    because i draw you near
    you cannot hide how you feel
    when i'm standing there.

    Ibrahim
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was very touching and surely one will
    never forget after reading this her heart will capture
    this deeply ......ibrahim u did it once again with this one !
     
  3. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brother $$RICH$$, i wish you knew how
    much i appreciate the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well i'm a fan of your work can't help myself
    Most welcome brutha , love is what it's all about !!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW !that was so beautiful
    I didn't know men could reach such a level of passion:tweety:
     
  6. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have just met one.
    Thanks for the love.
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother $$RICH$$ a fan?
    Lol...look at you.
    You are the greatest.
     
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    I loving this bruh
    Very moving piece
    The essence of the perfume
    My brother lay it down
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep! you captured love beautifully
     
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    Ibrahim I really enjoyed this..
    Thanks for sharing....
     
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