Black Poetry : So Deep

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Dec 4, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the fountains of my emotions
    Drawing up streams of exotic illusions in my sleep
    Drowning in the pools of fascinations
    Pretending
    That constantly unyielding
    Will somehow turn his head
    over to this way
    And speak
    The trenches of the my heart
    My inner sense of belonging
    There is no doubt
    That the shadows lurking behind me
    In my mind
    The inner demons taunting me
    Where do I go?
    Taking my purity
    Simply need to be restored
    Teach me nothing more
    To have love and patience
    Enough to cover a distance shore
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REAL DEEP

    ummm that was so nice and I am drowning in a sea of love...

    KUDOS very nice flow.:toast:

    Queen
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah i'm glad you enjoyed it thanks for reading my poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    storm ya knocking me out of flyte
    gurl dis was ummmm! tyght
     
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