Poetry Critiques : so cool

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sista-temeya, May 11, 2005.

  1. sista-temeya

    sista-temeya New Member MEMBER

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    was going to write a line but i kinda changed my mind...cus i lost the password on my acct and they won't seem to e-mail me back on time...so i deleted the original and posted this bull....so i won't be a victim of the latest scam the internet pulls
     
  2. Khasm13

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    is this supposed to be poetry or a poem?
    i am confused...


    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do revisit and bring it back
    no need to delete the words
    of honesty is sweet

    try again flow ya poem that piece .
     
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