Black Poetry : So Black, So Beautiful (another poem off the top of my head)

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    (whatever I post here is off the top of my head, so don't expect a masterpiece). :lol:

    So Black, So Beautiful

    When we spoke the other day, I couldn't help but notice your lovliness.

    Your eyes, your smile, your brown skin, and black hair.

    When you suggested that we do lunch and said that you loved me,

    I knew that your love was sincere and rare.

    Perhaps I should call you and set a date to have lunch together,

    It would be nice to hold you close again.

    I long for your embrace, but it's hard to resist your beauty.

    Perhaps I should control myself and just remain friends.

    (I better not post the rest of my thoughts, so I will just keep them to myself). :wink:
     
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    Slim (this poem is about a different blackwoman)

    You're a tall, slim cutie...wearing those tights that accent your body.

    Little by little, you're beginning to warm up to me.

    On the elevator, the other day, I watched you happily interacting with your brother,

    And that was the first time you actually smiled at me.

    I'm gonna ask for your name the next time I see you.

    It's very likely that I will see you again.

    I really like your style...wearing those tights that accent your body.

    I don't know your real name, but l call you "Slim".
     
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    Thick

    My ex-girlfriend was THICK;

    Brothers used to always compliment me on her beauty.

    They would say, "That's a good looking woman you got there!"

    I would then tell them, "Yeah, and i'm gonna KEEP her",

    But that was neither here nor there.

    She was my favorite woman, for reasons which I will not post here,

    And she is still a special lady to me.

    "Coffee Brown" with a Pam Grier body, she was THICK, superfine and sexy,

    But like Paul McCartney said, "Let it be." :toast:
     
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    the first post was like a story that took me in the details were deep.
    the second one you post you should of got her name ...lol
    the third and last was one you admired a lot sorry it didn't last
    but anyway I enjoyed the read...thank you for sharing you talent with us
     
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    The pleasure was all mine, sister.

    Thanks for your intelligence!
     
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    Talked to Slim yesterday and she mentioned her "husband".

    I guess that's the end of that.
     
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