Black Poetry : SO AMAZING

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  1. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SO AMAZING
    He says..... So Amazing how she reaches my soul
    How she teaches me life's untold
    Secrets of a love I had never been showed
    Was so used to just letting things unfold
    Pieces to land where they may
    But with her I wasted to stay
    Found myself often times wanting to pray
    My God please don't let her stray
    He says... So Amazing how she dreams my dreams
    And how she thinks my thoughts
    The way she says my words
    And reaches my goals
    He says.... So Amazing how she makes life worth living
    How she keeps me giving
    My whole heart she is stealing
    Um who am I fooling for I am willing.....
    To accept her unconditional LOVE
    He says.... So Amazing how her often misunderstood attitude
    Her challenging conversations
    Her so serious demeanor
    Her pushy ways
    Her cares and concerns
    Her structured life style
    Somehow makes my life complete
    He says.... So Amazing how she never cease to Amaze me​
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Julia.

    He is surely blessed. I need a Strong, Black woman like yourself to "Amaze Me." :wink:

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of him with the Family.

    :toast:
     
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    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Monetary kisses to ya!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! dis my kinda woman .....love this soft touch of flow to a heart
    flow on sis.
     
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    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop it Rich you making me Blush... lol thanks for the encouragement .. smauhhhhhh ....Ms J
     
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    MsJ i gotta tell it like it tis .......it was mesmerizing and heart felt make me wanna
    just love , love and love ....................................................................................
     
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    Very lovely, liked the movement of this flow about what she means to him, flow on poet.
     
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