Spoken Word : So Amazin'

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    So amazin’ so amazin’
    The way you keep hatin’
    The way you keep fakin’

    So amazin’ so amazin’
    the way your fakeness
    can’t be mistaken

    whaaaaat in the worrrrrld dooooo you wannnt ffroooomm mmee

    caaaaan’t you seeeee I’m fine so leeeeetttt me be

    so amazin’ so amazin’
    so amazin’ it’s amazin’

    it’s amazin’

    I’m the street maven
    While you were busy hatin
    You became a nightmare
    On elm street west of craven
    Friday the 13th on a titanic
    Sunk on the maiden
    voyage
    You’ve become a real annoyance
    And the petty enjoyment you get from
    Quoted installments man I done lost it
    I didn’t try and force it a just voiced it
    My opinion what world you livin’ in
    Where you sin again and say repent
    where the mind of chicken george is your pet
    and then you want respect
    I say rise up Black Man and Black Woman
    We have to work on undoin’
    But instead you walk around foolin’
    Talking about stuff that’s unproven
    And then you wonder why we’re not movin
    Forward you can’t ignore it because

    It’s amazin’ so amazin’

    So amazin’ so amazin’

    it's amazin'
     
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    Brother DSS ... i'm moving this to the Poetry Forums ... Spoken Word ... because we don't have poetry all over the house.

    If you want to do poetry here, please put it in the Poetry Forums.

    I know you know this, so my having to tell you, is a problem.

    I will not continue to tell you not to do, the things you already know, we don't do.

    If you can't respect how we live here, just don't come here ... please.

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  3. Da Street So'ja

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    i haven't been here

    when i left that's were i was putting it because it got kicked out of poetry,
    instead of being so quick to draw the gun on me, at least give me a heads up. when i left i put it here, i was not aware of any changes. i know you don't want me here it's all about i didn't disrespect anything. you dissed me and now this is how you have to come at me?

    i'm not the enemy
    you ain't got to worry about me no more i'm just posting but it seems you are insistent on antagonizing the situation. i'm not here for that.

    you say every is welcome, but then you want us to leave.

    i just posted where i was posting. i not aware of any change. this is not spoken word to me. because i'm just posting a video and i add some lyrics
    i thought spoken word was me actually doing spoken word. Instead of giving me the heads up here you come in attack mode. Why?
     
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    I'm not finna go word for word with you ... i've had my fill.

    The above was a warning (though i didn't call it that specifically), and i've already vowed i'd not give you any. I have absolutely no patience for anything that looks like disrespect of this community, and you've given a lot of that prior to (and even during) your suspension.

    Now that you're back ... if you want to stay ... please, respect this place, or you will be permanently banned.

    It's up to you.

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  5. Da Street So'ja

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    how is me asking question for clearance going word for word?

    i'm confused where did i disrespect the community?

    when i left i was posting in entertainment, i wasn't not aware of any change.

    you treat me as if i did something to you

    like i stole from you and that's sad.

    i'm not the enemy if i am then say so, i'm not here to for this

    i'm just posting a thread
     
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    Poetry belongs in the poetry forum.

    Music Videos belong in the entertainment forum.

    If you combine the two, then you're giving work to the TEAM, to decide if the thread should go in poetry or entertainment.

    I've decided to go with our long standing policy, that poetry is only found in the poetry forums, so i moved your poetry there.

    Since there is an issue, still yet to be resolved, regarding adding videos to the poetry forum ... i've also decided (in lieu of a final solution) ... that most videos are really just poetry put to music, a spoken word of sorts ... and i've put them up here too (if they have poetry attached to them).

    Ideally though ... it's best to put music videos in the entertainment forum, and poetry in the poetry forums ... separating them.

    But when Members don't do that ... again ... it requires the TEAM to make a judgement call on it.

    If you want your stuff to be where you put it, let it qualify fully for that forum.

    Does that answer your question?

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    um

    i did post a thread like this is the poetry forum before i left and is was moved to entertainment. that's all i'm saying

    why didn't you start here from the jump? it's yet to be resolved but yet you're chastising me for something i was unaware of. i don't get it

    :?:

    now today my first day here i didn't know you consider this SPOKEN WORDS of sorts, of sorts? and yet you're mad at me because i'm supposed to know about "yet to be resolved" and "of sorts".

    thank you for the clarification now. i will post these in spoken word, just like you've requested.
     
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    I didn't request that ... i said ... ideally, the video would be separate from the poetry, so each can be where they belong.

    But if you must combine them ... yes, put it here, in Spoken Word.

    Thanks.

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    no prob

    :fyi:
     
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    Glad to read it ... and Welcome Back ... :love:

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