Quiet Poetry Lounge : Snuggle

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 15, 2006.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Didn't even want to write anything lovey dovey
    Guess it was the chilly rain
    that made me think of this
    gentle on the brain
    refrain...
    Snuggle
    His arms around.
    A well "melaninated" chest
    my head has found.
    I can feel his heart beating
    What a sweet way to count sheep
    As his heart becomes syncopated with mine
    beating in this Eden before we fall asleep
    Snuggle
    Amidst the candlelight, looking up at him
    I find him looking down at me
    The dance of a thousand midnights
    within each other's eyes, we see.
    Inhaling the sweet and salty aroma,
    just the natural scent of him
    He gently kisses my forehead
    As the flickering flame goes dim
    Snuggle
    Easing our heads back down
    Deep sighs, beyond content
    Pillow talk, murmured
    as earthy emotions become spent
    No need for coital communications
    Holding one another so tight
    We give each other one final squeeze
    before closing our eyes for the night
    SSSSSSnuggle
    Listen to that gentle rain
    ZZZZZZZ
    Rest well baby...
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh sista watz, this was passionately sweet.
    Nothing like a good "Snuggle":)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Rain do all that !!!

    can i snuggle wit u
    be the one u envision
    caress u in comforting
    snuggle.

    whewwwww! watz u got me going
     
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    hey watz im about to go snuggle too. thanks for the inspiration!
     
  5. queentswana

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    Snuggle is a wonderful thing to do in rain, snow,wind and just plain old love. It does tend to Unite the hearts as ONE,
    It's one of the greatest conversations without the words. We need to snuggle from time to time just to say to him/her ...hey, I'm here.
    I like this piece, and surely I know it made some of us "snuggle" QQn :spin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4Everluv, so glad you found this to be sweet, thank you poetess.
    Yes there's something about that rain, thank you brotha Rich for commenting so.
    So nevar, how did that snuggling go? Thank you much.
    The ability to say so much without any words... Agreed queent, certainly is wonderful. So did this make you snuggle too? QQn...lol. Thank you sis.
     
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