Black Poetry : Snowflakes(a sarcasm n Royal_T joint)(repost)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, May 16, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not sleepin nemore,
    U no longer have me in a trance.

    Mad peeps was lovin me n all i could see was u,
    Had my vision blurry, so i'd only reach out 2 u.

    Now I'm awake, walkin thru the snowflakes,
    Wonderin y i let u in, knowin it was a sin.

    Lettin u in was definitely a sin,
    But the way it felt made me grin.

    The peeps that i let pass me by,
    Wont show me love nemore, I wonder why.

    My vision was blurry but i went to lens crafters ya see,
    Got specs 4 life, now you're where i used 2 b.

    Ur vision is blurred n ur stomach turns at the thought
    That i walked out n left u all the **** that u bought.

    I'm free my dear.
    Free from the fear.

    The fear that I'll b alone without u,
    But that sexy thing there already scooped me up boo.
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow ya'll two :) ya'll always give me sumthin goooooooooooodddd lol peace and blessins sistas keep flowin
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice *** flow and im feelin it
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

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    i can really feel where ur comin from with this one. nice flow.
     
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    aww thanx everyone......... i appreciate all ur comments. much love :)
     
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    Enjoyed this free flow!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    How dumb am I? I didn't even realize this was here. I'm digging the editing. You did yo thang girl :) :) :)
     
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    lol @ Royal_T.........glad u enjoyed........much love :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all snap !!!!!
    dis was awesome u two
    i felt every line posed
    i want mo ! i want mo !! i want mo !!!
     
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    It feels so good to be free! loved it!
     
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