Black Poetry : snow flakes(passing by)

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Snow flake, little snow flake
    try to imitate, but you’re so fake
    they accept you in their world and you vacate,
    abandon what was great to copy their gait.
    ***1n’ ingrate,
    ashamed of your roots, so you switch plates,
    hoping to eat better cause your $hit’s straight,
    nap free, but you’re tangled by misplaced hate.
    So what, you got a slight pigment deficiency,
    that ain’t no reason to forfeit your history.
    Light-skin doesn’t necessarily mean the plight ends,
    karma comes around just as sure as the earth spins.
    Don’t count on that lack of black T&A,
    cause when the time comes and they research that DNA,
    you’ll be nothing more than another n1gga lead astray,
    all that special treatment and fitting in just fades away,
    but who am I, to tell you how to act or what to say?
    I’m your brother,
    although maybe from another mother,
    the bond we share is stronger then any strength that you could muster.
    It’s a shame you couldn’t recognize the beauty of our luster,
    so as they say in Cali, you ain’t nothing but a mother ***1ng buster.
    Nothing is new under the sun,
    so why you faking?
    It was “passing” back in the day, but now it’s flaking.
    The house n1gga evolved from snitch to filthy rich,
    snubbing beautiful black wives for a filthy pale b1tch.
    What’s the deal with, all this illegal reneging*,
    won’t play the hand you’re dealt,
    but when they flip the script, you catching feelings.
    Poor little snow flake, you hate the skin you’re in,
    but you can never cover up what is buried deep within.


    *reneging - the act of hiding your true self, only to have the very people you wanna be, call you out. (And best believe it’s be ****** they’ll call you) a ren1gger.

    Peace Lyr1c


    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up u said it and came correct
    what a tale spin
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice! Sounds like winter in wannabe America.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No sense in trying to hide what you are, the truth has it's way of coming to light, sometimes in the most painful way. Tight write. Nice reading you again.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight i enjoyed this flow on poet enjoyed reading you
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    jmmmh...this was still the wonderful poet...
    an interesting diffrent vibe..albeit about the concept of consciousness
    l love your work...and your mind
    my mmmh is my own sense of trying to understand
    those mixed race children...this new tribe
    in england they call them half-caste (really)
    but the rhythms..the clarion call to come together
    is clear..
    so let me shut up and say ...you are appreciated by me
    this new tribe tho...strange group
    don't you think?
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesomely tight flow, as always poet...don't slow up the pen, we enjoy your work too much. So I'll keep QQn for you.
     
  8. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa..........this caught me offguard.
    this drop is so raw, and real. Dang,
    you ain't put no limits on this...i like that

    peace Brotha


    I applaud thee
     
  9. robryant1106

    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    Tzevi1, As you know, I am one of your biggest fans!!! This piece is one of the many reasons why!!! :blowkiss:
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is the ish that they need...

    Check 'em hard, bruh.

    Nice one.

    Peace.
     
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