Discussion in 'Short Stories - Authors - Writing' started by African_Prince, Oct 6, 2009.
I'm nowhere near finished, I have many more pages to go but tell me what you think so far :
I am diggin it so far
Thanks for the Sneak Preview
I think your off to a great start! Its definitely a story I could get into. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing it with us.
I enjoyed this so far you have a gifted hand and mind to tell a great story !!!!
Thank you but I feel embarassed re-reading it.
It continues :
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