Black Poetry : Smotherin, Brown Brotha, The Recipe Of The Black Man

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smotherin Brown Brotha
    Recipe Of The Black Man

    Smotherin Brown Brotha, a prefect mold.
    A man of substance.
    Sculptured from deep dark chocolate,
    oozin down board shoulders,
    drippin to his torso
    with a pinch of bakin powda
    causin the raise of his masuline chest.
    Glazin over his arms,
    with a flavain of strength,
    yet gentle enough
    to wrap around a Brown Sista.
    Flows to his mid section
    definin a seasoned sixpak.
    Braisin buns plump, complimentin his simmerin physique,
    makin a Brown Sista bake for his sake.
    Long, thick leg garnished with muscles,
    as if they've marinaded a lifetime.
    His strut is allspice, with a heapin helpin of confidence,
    as if he's floatin on air.
    His body stuffed in garments extract his structure.
    The Brown Sistas react inhales then exhales
    sendin sounds of mmmmmmmmm!
    rollin from their taste buds.
    Exceptional Smotherin Brown Brotha,
    the main course of every Brown Sista,
    with a side of smile,
    that makes a Brown Sista say,
    "No thank ya." to the Vanilla Fellas.
    Yeah! That Smotherin Brown Brotha's unique ingredience
    though many seek, they can't compete.

    copyright2000
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco

    I want two with xtra allspice and make him xtra dark!!!!!!!!!!! Beautifuly done.




    One
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bake me...

    to a deep brown hue
    not burnt
    simmering
    just for you

    coco,
    you flowed this one just right.

    zorb,
    two {2}.
    hmmm
    ya sure you can handle that much smothering brown brotha?:)

    handle yo biznez den gurlfriend.

    peace, y'all
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    only

    if you are the second one :cool:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I Agree!

    no cream or suga
    smooth dark & lovely

    Coco ya laid des one out .....:toast:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh coco? I'm done and waitin' to be taken out the oven. This was hot!!! Dark chocolate, yes, yes, yes....Godiva, indeed.

    one love, BLAK (chocolate)
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAHLL!!!!

    I feel a bake sale coming on!!

    How much for that heapin helpin of smothering brown brotha??

    money is no object when you baking a beautiful black man :)

    *chocolate-cake*
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmmm! A bake sale. If only it was that simply. If a black man could be baked, then a woman's place would definitely be in the kitchen, at least mine would. lol......I just can't say enough about the black man. He'd look good in a potatoe sack. Of course we know this is only a drop in the bucket of his GREATNESS!

    Thank you guys for your replys. Coco
     
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    Nothin.....Like being smothered..
    by a black man...go on nah!

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    response to the test

    Some sweetness for Sweetest's day
     
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