Black Poetry : Smoove talk 3

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..baby, after separating the
    rum and coke and music and smoke
    I couldn't help
    but notice YOU standing
    over here by yourself
    looking good...yeah, I knew you
    knew that I just had to
    reiterate your knowledge.
    would you like to dance/
    probably not cause I've seen you
    shoot down many brothers throughout
    the night had those cats
    spiraling back out of control
    ...I saw two in the bathroom
    comparing wounds...see...that's
    why I came over here I llike pain...
    no, I don't want you
    to shoot me down, hurt my feelings
    just spank me a little after the party is
    over / or even on the dance floor /
    yeah even I can back that thang iup
    if you're behind me...but I ain't
    perculating nothin' that's bad on the
    "fellas"....what you do for a livin'?
    see I'm a writer but we can both be
    mathematicians if we imagine your
    thighs as an even number and you
    let me divide them equally...I promise
    to tell you the answer in "tongues"
    ....and best believe me you'll understand
    me...girl...u mmm. ummm. ummm
    you look **** good, minding' your
    own **** business but I'm
    an entrepreneur and would like to
    get to understand your "bottom line"
    ...and how we can synergize into
    one perfect "entity"..it don't
    have to be permanent / to
    many legalities / and temporary
    is always all good and ****
    you look **** good and tasty...
    can I call you chocolate krispy kreme
    delight? I just might eat you
    right here at the bar...okay I'm sorry
    don't mean to offend you I just have
    this problem with being "instantly infatuated"
    by fine women...and you fall under that
    definition..you know I had this premonition
    that after this night I would see you again
    maybe over dinner or over me / see
    I'm hungry and need to be fed...
    okay maybe not but can you just stand
    here and let my imagination grind
    with your visions? bite your lip a little
    so I know your enjoying what i'm seeing...
    the mind is strong you can do it...
    if not I can show you what I saw...I
    won't even take up all your time I'll
    be quick...you won't leave unsatisfied
    they don't call me "snicker" for nothing...
    see I ain't funny, I'm dead serious
    like wearing pork chop underwear
    in a lion's den/it's yo' skin I want to get
    next too..well just whisper something
    in my ear / if you like you can nibble
    I won't even press assualt charges or
    call you mike tyson /
    so whats up can we get involved
    in some actions sanctioned by the sex gods
    ...okay maybe not but lets go dance
    I won't grope you, but i'm gone think about it
    it's only been five minutes and dang girl I love you...
    ....I know I don't know your name yet
    you haven't told me...oh, and...you ..don't...
    plan...to..you have any friends?

    Blakverb "jus' trippin"
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLaK-NeSs.


    dang you makin' a sistah wanna write a response!

    this was just too **** cute! & you are correct...
    you ARE trippin!! but... you doin' da **** thang
    tyght-ly... & the visuals are sooo entertainin'!

    hey! by the way... when you send that application
    fee to Sherry... be sure to include an extra hun-did
    dollas for me!! (LOL)

    :heart:
    GA~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb

    man ya do the bad man walk coz dis
    be on target work dem sopts:D
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Now I really know the truth....brotha, you've got madd issues! :lol: :lol: :D

    (and madd skillz, but then again, this ain't nuttin' new) :)

    Loved it!

    N2
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...

    ...you could smooth
    talk me anytime, and
    you wouldn't even
    have to ask, I'd
    tell you my name,
    and stuff...:D

    Go 'head blak man
     
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