Black Poetry : SMOOTHER

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smoother,
    as if chains grasping at my
    feet and hands inside
    burning like fire not knowing
    which way to turn
    I failed my dream
    can only live for today
    hoping for tomorrow
    my future seems
    dark
    hurting like no end
    I shed my tears
    inside so my friend don’t see
    me weak but
    not knowing of the
    outcome my heart drips
    blood leading me into
    depression
    I suffer for so long
    as never to end.
    I walk the street in
    desire looking to
    find a way out but
    no ends to what
    I feel as faults for a pass life
    that wasn’t mine.
    I open up my heart
    look into my soul
    drop to my knees
    to cry out for I built
    my chains now
    unable to break them
    nightmares come
    as the night passes
    I fold in a corner not
    taking the pain.
    I am who I am
    Blackangel
    that’s me
    I pick up my head
    in sorrow knowing
    not how to fix this,
    heart turn of blue
    the water runs black
    luck yea right
    never made it my way.
    Never found
    love nor have it came to me
    I the outcast of the world born
    by mistake fixing everyone elses.
    Pretend to be strong when indeed
    I am the weak.
    a blkangel thang....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold your faith closer and know u are who u are
    raise up your head and speak on coz i'm watching
    and listening
    where one seem weak is stronger then self know
    feelin' dis scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have an old soul i been told i feel what i write it eases alot of my day of running with the kids and handling the store accounts....
    it came to me when i was 10 with my first poem and been writing ever since..with my writng i never thought it would get this far but i love to write i dont think it i feel it so it comes for the soul
     
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    I really like this, and what you say about people who appear strong is sometimes very true. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
     
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    i understand more than u know my sista life has a way of forcing u to be on guard at all times...scribe on :) because u do it so well :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Triniti
    i am new to this site and family and
    you have shown alot of love thank you very much
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Triniti
    i am new to this site and family and
    you have shown alot of love thank you very much
     
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    never a mistake
    you are by divine design
    uniquely you
    know this
    only when weak
    can you be strong
    where faith is
    there is light
    where love is
    there is hope

    glad you blessed us with this piece, I really felt it...we all have our moments...you gave them a voice
     
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    blaquebutterfli
    thank you for relpin
     
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