Black Poetry : Smokescreen~Haiku

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Nov 4, 2001.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a supermodel
    lives on lettuce and cocaine
    no beauty in that


    (c) nfn 2001
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    plenty of beauty in this!!

    *lettuce*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Kitana

    her super inner beauty lay within her
    in a haiku way that she be born again

    love how u brought this out !!:)
     
  4. j'hiah

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    bo booty in that either
    :jawdrop:

    nice one.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "bo" = "no"

    one o' dem finger freudian slips...

    *checkin out more from ya'*
     
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    lmao again

    Jh quote "no booty in that either"

    whewwww!

    Kitana, you did it again girl

    keep it coming
     
  8. alyce

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    speaks volumes

    about the ugly secrets of the "beauty industry".....sad truth...

    well done, Kitana, as always

    thank you for this


    a
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    DEEP DEEP

    YEAH THE GAME HAS SOME HARSH RULES AT TIMES

    <dssny>
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter...glad to hear there's more to life than eatin lettuce..lol

    Rich...thank you for the compliment...I'm trying to get it right...

    Jhiah..I ain't touching that one....but I'm laughin at ya

    Ra..yep..sure is nasty but I guess it boils down to the money/fame combination...

    pd..thanks..you know how much I always appreciate your read and your words...and for making me smile...

    a...yes it is sad huh...especially when so many young girls want to be just like the "pretty" girls they see in the magazines and on the t.v..not knowing the reality...

    So'ja...it sure does...but so many continue to play the game..makes you wonder...