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  1. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see your form from down the street. even now after all these years my heart skips a beat. It is the appointed time and place we are to meet. I am beside you now and feel the heat.

    The heat so hot but funny how it soothes our spot. We can't stop. Oh no we dare not. I, we burn with desire like we are on fire. We make it home and hope to take it higher. It is no joke whatever you touch woman brings smoke. I don't choke and in this minute and hour we have the power to go for broke.

    Breast to chest from East to West. I want to love you i confess better than any and all the rest. I give you my best. We have stood the test. Your heat makes me complete. It makes me think of something good to eat like sweet.

    Your like a berry a sweet delicious black cherry. We love I can't stop until we both go down and drop and back up again to the top.

    Tiny hands and feet you are like something good to eat. I'm determined girl to love you long and good like your guy should and put you in hypnotic sleep.

    It is no joke woman you bring smoke. I am on fire with desire,but it is okay cause i can cope. I lead you follow. You drink i swallow. We have yet to live,because there is much more love to give. We burn but we do not turn because our love has been confirmed.

    Copyrighted Robbboy2003


    Love her constantly,consistently,and with concern!:devil: :flamet: :flame:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just smokinnnnnnn!!!!
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm...this was badd rite herr...(in a gud way)..u kno..lol
    body heat was smoking :hot:
    so much desire
    i enjoyed this piece
    i mite wanna remix this piece wit u
    so flo on

    blackluv and bp
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece came alive with a sizzlin burn. Enjoyed.
     
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    OOOHHHH SMOKE......

    robboy:
    You sure brought it with this one. HOTT TO DEATH!!!!
    REALLY LUVN' THIS SMOKE!

    Much Luv
     
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    Very hot poem.
     
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    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is one true treasure,and is something we all do measure. The ability and quality to love. It fits on a together person like a hand into a glove.

    The more ya appreciate it the more i want to write of!

    Luv ya! Peace!:thanks: :thanks:
     
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