Black Poetry : Smoke

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 14, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every morning when I wake

    There is a fine misty film all around me

    Like smoke

    Steam rises

    From my body

    Cause the night before I burned

    Like flames

    The heat was so intense

    That I have scorch marks between my thighs

    As he does

    On his lips.

    Every morning

    As I raise my pleasantly sore

    Body from the Love nest

    I remember the spark

    That ignited the flames

    The whisper of a touch

    The wetness of the lick

    The smoothness of the entry.

    Every evening

    As we lay

    Just as the smoke is clearing

    We ignite the spark

    That leaves behind the smoke
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!

    FIREEEEEEE!!!!! FULL OF LOVE:heart:
     
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    hmmmmm...Water please...kinda hot in here ;)
     
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    Nice Piece

    Sounds like the heat is on....
     
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