Black Poetry : SMOKE SCREEN

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMOKE SCREEN



    Black stallions sportin’ medallions
    The ruler of his ghetto kingdom
    Known by name but erased by face
    Because nobody chooses to see him
    Fear of nothing but the tragedy of being broke
    But in reality it’s a fatality to see your life in a cloud of black smoke.

    Whistles blowing and pistols going
    Is that the black American dream?
    Well please send me back to slavery
    Because at least the enemy wasn’t me

    You say forget school
    Who needs a GED?
    Your education is supplied by a symbolic nation
    Who will never allow you to go free?

    Make money for me
    Take a bullet for me
    I’m not a punk
    I’m just respecting my loyalty
    After all, my nigz***** are the ones that raised me!

    But if you look closely you will see,
    That without self- knowledge
    You could never acknowledge the escape is not in the weed!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte
     
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    Thank you rich baby:kiss1:
     
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    thanks for the knowledge cursed heart flow on sista.:blowkiss:
     
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    THat was a nice flow
    Hell of a meaning in the flow
    Nice Piece Poet
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you nevar and tantrum
     
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    man..
    you is on point!
    I loved this piece..
    :kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you sistah PoeticManifesta
     
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    That was deep, cursed heart.
    I really enjoy reading yr drops.
     
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    true sister, all of your poems are awe inspiring and contain the depth and breadth necesary to reach the hearts and minds of an oppressed, yet still dignified people. You have the power to open the eyes (third eye) of a blind and slumbering nation. I, personally, remain inspired. Continue to believe, recieve and emit, also never forget! One, Bless...
     
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